October assessment learner response

 Feedback:www-There is clear potential in several of my answers and also a very useful lesson in the exam technique too.

EBI-very simply read the question this costs you marks in Q3+Q4.I need to write in more depth and detail for high mark questions like Q9.

Q1)0 marks,because i did read the question properly.

Q2)1 mark in the 1 mark question

Q3)no marks in this question because i thought it was linked to the beyonce poster which was a bad mistake because it would have told me to refer to one of the figures.

Q4)no marks again because i thought it was linked to the beyonce poster an i can learn from this because next time i would know to refer to the figure or not.

Q5)full marks (2)

Q6)full marks (3)

Q7) full marks (2)

Q8) this question was a four mark question and i got 2 marks i could have got full marks if i wrote 2 paragraphs one about why it is effective and another paragraph on what it communicates to to the audience.

4)One of my stronger questions was q6 this was one of my stronger questions because i was able to connote and reveal the deeper meaning of what it tells our audience about the poster .

5)one of my weaker questions was q8 and the reason why i lost some marks in this question is because i should of went in to further depth and explained why it is effective.

6)Re-draft question 9)

Charities use pictures of children in their advertising because it makes the consumer fell sympathy for the children.Also because the producer wants the consumer to donate to charity.The connotation for this could mean that people in these areas are still developing.Advertisers may also use children because it makes there audience think about what they would do if they were in that position.additionally with other charity companies such as unicef the blue in their logo connotes sadness around the world and it could also connote the same thing in the water aid logo.

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